For The Sunday Muse prompt #180:
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We come to water
to be washed and be reborn,
this hand cupping the curvature
of the face, the other dipped,
drenched in the very fluid
from which we come, the space
between the fingers of that hand
filled with the water, straining
against the strictures
of the hand.
We come to water
to lose ourselves in the beauty
of the simple things, to see
the dirt of our days and the detritus
of the night loosen, dissolving
until we see ourselves pristine
whole again, the way we
have imagined in our dreams
a lip, an eye, lingering still
in the mirror of still water.
Wow A.J.this is absolutely breathtaking! I love the water, the cleansing, rebirth, and reflection in this. A deep and beautifully written poetic message. I love this!!
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I enjoyed how you linked the mirror and water … well done!
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A beautiful contemplation.
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So beautiful, peaceful, redemptive
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